It looks real clean, but what are you doing with it? Are looking to promote just the 2 anglers highlighted or are you a rep company with those 2 anglers? It's not very clear to me.
I built our college club's website, which was easy to define what it's purpose is. So the only thing I could recommend is focus your main page mission statement or purpose of intent. Try adding a tag line, like "Anglers for hire" or "Fan page for Florida fishing"
And here's my page:www.untbassclub.webs.com